Becoming Heath Barkley - Night
A/N: And so Heath's day comes to an end. Will he be able to go to sleep with a calm and peaceful mind? Enjoy. Laura Night Heath stood in the barn, his forearms resting on the top of Coco's stall. He...
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You bet he does Laura! Great work! I loved Nick and Heath's talk. The writing is excellent!!Youre not to work tomorrow. I may run the ranch, but I wont cross Mother. Nick turned and began walking back...
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Great story! Sorry to see it end. Maybe we could go on the cattle drive? See what else happens?CASEY
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I LOVE this side of Nick Barkley, the deep thinking, compassionate, willing to give Nick Barkley! He is definitely a multifaceted character, and you wrote him brilliantly!This was my favorite...
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Excellent chapter! I love the chat between Nick and Heath, and Nick's explanation about how he had to earn the Barkley name also.If he lived to be a thousand years, hed never be able to predict this...
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Right you are, Red, and it's refreshing that Nick admitted it to this new brother who it seems he's now willing to give a chance! And a horse!! I like this NIck!!!!
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I waited through to the posting of this chapter because I wanted to read the whole rest of this story in one sitting. Great "behind the scenes" story, Laura.
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That was I loved Nick's explanation behind what he does and why and how he fought to where he was today. It adds so much more depth and understanding to these 2 brothers in their early days and why we...
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Great story and a great ending too..Nick and Heath have definitely found some common ground and a certain understanding...it bodes well for the future! Thank you for this story, I really enjoyed it...
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I really enjoyed this look at a day in the life of my favorite cowboy. You did a great job of exploring that early development of the brotherhood between Nick and Heath. Thanks!Debbie
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Wonderful end to a great day in the life and a great story! Thank you!
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So Heath got some encouragement from Nick, along with the horse and the girl. I wonder which meant the most to him?
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I loved it!! Nick may have seemed tough, but he had an extremely sensitive side that understood what Heath was going through.Sarah
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That was a fabulous chapter, Laura! I loved the conversation between the brothers and the insight Nick gives us into the struggles he went through establishing his mastery of the ranch. The giving of...
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Laura:This was truly an incredible story - I love how you give us insight here into Heath adjusting to his new family, but how Nick is adjusting as well. And his talk with Heath is just incredible. We...
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Now youre thinking like a Barkley. Because were the biggest ranch in the area, what happens here has a great impact on those around us. So you see, its not just one sick calf. Nick turned to leave....
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Laura that was great. I loved all of it, my only complaint is it was way too short. Nick & Heath's conversation was magical, the brothers coming to understand each other better. Any chance that...
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How generous of Nick to admit his own weakness to Heath. That alone must have done wonders to dispel Heath's doubts of becoming a Barkley. Yes, becoming Heath Barkley is very difficult, but I don't...
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